A Bad Day At The Beach
- Each line is a page.
Today it’s hot out.
So Daisy and her family are going to the beach.
After a very long ride, they finally reach the beach.
The sun and sand are super hot.
But the water is ice cold.
After playing in the water, Daisy sits in the sand to warm up.
All of a sudden- something pinches Daisy.
“OW!” Yelled Daisy, jumping up. Looking down she sees a crab.
Upset Daisy runs back into the water, but forgot it was cold.
Dripping wet, Daisy runs to her mom.
“Mama!” I wanna go home! Daisy cried out.
Instead, Daisy’s mom shook her head. “Come with me Daisy.” Taking Daisy’s hand, they walked away from the water.
And ended up at an Ice cream truck.
Daisy and her mom got some Ice cream and walked back to the water.
But before long, Daisy dropped her Ice cream.
Daisy began to cry, so her mom brought her back to the towel.
Suddenly Daisy fell asleep and took a nap.
When Daisy woke up, She was very hot and itchy.
Daisy went to scratch her arm and screamed out in pain.
Daisy had a SUNBURN!
Once again in tears, Daisy ran to her mom.
“Mama, I WANNA GO HOME!!!!” Daisy screamed.
Tired out, Daisy was carried by her dad to the car.
And on the way home…..
Daisy fell asleep.
When they got home, Daisy’s parents woke her up and brought her in.
Daisy had some cold cream on her that took away the pain of the sunburn. Then she had a snack and went to sleep. Before Daisy fell asleep, she thought to herself “I hope we go back to the beach tomorrow.”
get rid of the line ¨and daisy got ice cream¨ and get rid of the last line, just have it end with her falling asleep in the car.
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